Ooooohhh!
Creepy voices at the beginning, like ghosts in a horror movie. I love it!
Ooooohhh!
Creepy voices at the beginning, like ghosts in a horror movie. I love it!
heh, it's actually a piece of voice acting from one of my flash movies (A Roger Roger Short most likely) reversed, slowed down, then cleaned up and filtered
Cool.
Interesting song. The ending is a little abrupt, but otherwise I like it. It sounds sort of surreal. I could imagine someone walking along a road in a desert, then they're running, then these creepy clowns start showing up everywhere on bikes or stilts, then all these other circus elements start showing up. What would be good for the end is if you could make it end a little slower. If you were to make a video with my idea (you don't have to of course, but it would be pretty cool) then in the ending, you would have all the circus elements slowly leave, then the person stops, the piano is playing quietly like it does in the beginning and the person bends over with their hands on their knees and panting.
Hm.
The end was a little random. Otherwise it's pretty cool.
How the hell did this get front page???
Here's what I recomend:
1. Get singing lessons
2. Work on singing the chorus more in sinc (speling? Oh well) with eachother.
3. Make more of a lead into the song
4. Turn up the voice box volume (there's some way to do this mechanically, right?) and tone down the drums
5. Slow down the guitarist a little
Doesn't flow
Each individual part is good, but they should flow into eachother more so it sounds like one song rather than sounding like 5 or ten differant songs.
I will bare that in mind when I come to edit it!
Thanks
FJ
Hmmm...
I didn't like the beginning, how the voice that says "Welcome to Hell" sounds kind of wierd and doesn't seem to blend well with the music. I did like how at the end you have the words go back and forth between the ears.
Amazing
Sing louder. Otherwise, it's incredible! Kudos to you.
Fitting title
It's very peaceful, yet hopeful. I like it. I've been listening to a lot of repetative songs today too, so to hear a song that's not only not repetative, but quite varied, is forgiving to the ears. Viva Musica!
Ha! Futurama!
That's pretty fricken' awesome! I'de like to see a music video that's sort of a psychadelic hippie totally high/futuristic futurama synthesis.
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