ELBlove7's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HighestBeat(demo)]

Ok, something's not quite right.

You introduce some instraments at the end that probably could have been introduced a little sooner. Oh, and you end WAY too abruptly. This song probably could have lasted another minute or so. Fix those things and it will be awesome, until then though...

APPSmusic responds:

i already did this is a demo the full version is here http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/117222

[Harp Slammer]

Could use some work

At first it's repetative, which is not bad as some other people ar saying in the reviews. What the problem is, is that you make the repetative part last too long and intraduce the harmonica too late in the song. Then, there are big breaks where you hear the repetative music again. I think it would be good if you introduce the harmonica sooner, then really rock it out. Maybe too, the breaks should be shorter, filled more often with a quiet harmonica or other instrament (I think you used the guitar) and maybe if you also introduce a xylophone into the piece.

[Grey Goose]

Unusual style, works well

I think it's interesting that your sort of going aggainst the stereotype of violance in rap music, yet you're still giving the message of wild crazy fun. You also use some instruments that aren't generally used in rap music. It's really unusual, but I like the effect.

I could say that I don't like the amount of swearing or the encouragement towards drugs, but I also am not part of that culture and am therefore looking from the outside in (and therefore have no right to judge). A lot of people seem to believe that anyone with differant morals and values have low morals and values. Personally, I don't think that a person can have low morals and values, just differant morals and values. IOW, right and wrong is for the most part determined by the individual.

[Chrono Eternity (B0UNC3 R]

Cool Techno

It seems to start a little to abruptly. Your beginning music is probably supposed to lead into the rest, and it did, but not as well as it could have. You almost need a...pre-lead. Like, keep it, but just make a lead before that. It's pretty cool otherwise. I like the squeeky voice, and all the differant instruments.

[No Snow]

HaHaHa

I think it would have been good if you put a part where it's just music, and maybe make it a little longer, but regardless, it is funny. I think it would be funny too, if you could make a song about some place with too much snow (if you don't know what that's like, you could probably get someone to help you with the lyrics). Oh, I almost forgot to mention, I like the over-all sarcastic attitude. Hmmm....Now that I'm hearing it again, I'd also like to say that singing fast is fine, as long as you sing very clearly. If you don't, it's easy for the listener to miss some of what you're saying.

[The Shadow Of Mind]

Cool

I like how the music seemed to have a balance of more high pitched sounds and some more low pitched sounds. I also liked how there was moments when the music was full of many differant sounds, but then there was parts with less sounds and was quieter and almost had an airy feel to it. Very well made.

Masakazu responds:

Heh, a cool review Thanks :)